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I would really appreciate if someone could review and correct the mistakes that I have surely made. Essay question: Teenagers and your people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree? Write between 140 and 190 words Although it sound right to say that household chores should be equally divided on every member of a family, parents , or better mothers, do the most of it. That 's quite strage because often parents have less time than most of the teenagers do. On one hand teenagers are often being submerged by homeworks, on the ther hand if they manage those homework well, they're probable to have at least 2 hours per day for doing housework and then practise their favorite sports, which is vital. The real problem is that teenagers don't do housework as well, in terms of effectiveness, as parents generally do. My point of view is that chores are boring and should be made by the whole family together. This improves not only the relationships among parents and sons but it also gives teenagers some more tools for when they will go live alone for any reason (university, work, stages, etc..). 156 Words. Thank you in advice.

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I would really appreciate if someone could review and correct the mistakes that I have surely made.

Essay question: Teenagers and young people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree?
Write between 140 and 190 words

Although it sounds right to say that household chores should be equally divided amongst every family member, parents , or more exactly, mothers, do most of it.
That 's quite strange because often parents have less time than teenagers. On the one hand, teenagers are often being submerged by homeworks. On the the other hand if they manage their homeworks well, they can have, importantly, at least 2 hours per day for housework and sports.
The real problem is that teenagers are less efficient than their parents in their housework.
I think that chores are boring and should be shared by everybody. This improves not only the relationships among parents and sons but it also equips teenagers to live alone for any reason (university, work, stages, etc..).
<156 Words.

Thank you in advance.

Very well written!

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