Learning new language
There are so many people live in the world,and there are many languages in the world,too.
People always learn new things at every moment, like cooking or making something special, learning a different language also is one of a thing we can learn.Two months ago, I thought I should learn a new language that I can understand the people who can not speak my language want to tell me, what they want or their stories, so I started to find a language that is suitable for me,hope I can find it as soon as possible！
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Learning new language
There are so many people living in the world and there are many languages too.People learn new things all the time, like cooking or making something special and learning a different language is also something we can learn.Two months ago, I decided that I should learn a new language so I can understand people who can not speak my language and want to talk to me, so I started to look for a language that is suitable for me. I hope I can find it as soon as possible！
Hello!
Good effort.
I shortened the first sentence because you don't need to say "in the word" twice.
I changed "tell" to talk because it is a better word to use when people are having a conversation.
I changed "find" to look because it sounds like you haven't found what you are seeking yet.
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