Formal letter :) Dear teachers. Firstly, I wanted to say thank you so much, I’m very grateful for the support you all give me last year, I learned a lot and when I immersed myself in the opera world I

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Formal letter :) Dear teachers. Firstly, I wanted to say thank you so much, I’m very grateful for the support you all give me last year, I learned a lot and when I immersed myself in the opera world I discovered that it was indeed what I want to do. I'm writing you this letter because I want to be part of the institute again. Due that I don’t have the means to afford it I am applying for the scholarship. The institute granted me a lot of knowledge and I tried to be like a sponge in order to learn the most I could and with all the advices I did improve my singing right away. I know I’m a beginner and I still have a long way to go but I can assure you that I’m very commitment and I put all my effort on what I do. Since the institute I have made progress and that’s something my teacher can validate. I can not tell you if it is big or short progress but I always try to be better that the day before and I feel that this time I will take all the advices in a different way due to the fact that I have become a very curious and observant person. I can only say you will see that I will take the most advantage of it as I can. I send my best regards

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Formal letter :)

Dear Teachers,
Firstly, I wanted to say thank you so much, I’m very grateful for the support you all give me last year, I learned a lot and when I immersed myself in the opera world I discovered that it was indeed what I want to do.
I'm writing you this letter because I want to be part of the institute again. Due that Since I don’t have the means to afford it myself, I am applying for the scholarship.
The institute granted me a lot of knowledge and I tried to be like a sponge in order to soak up learn as much as the most I could and with all the advices you gave me my singing immediately improved. I did improve my singing right away.
I know I’m a beginner and I still have a long way to go, but I can assure you that I’m very committed commitment and I always give 110%. put all my effort on what I do.
Since (joining? working with?) the institute I have made impressive progress and that’s something my teacher can validate. I cannot tell you if it is big or short progress but I always try to be better than the day before and I feel that this time I will take all the advices in a different way even more to heart, due to the fact that I have become a very curious and observant person. I can promise you that only say you will see how wholeheartedly I make the most of my time there. that I will take the most advantage of it as I can.

I send my best regards,

Some notes:
- My other job is as an opera singer! If you ever want a lesson about the opera world please think of me :)
- 'Due to' is used with the gerund ('ing') form. e.g. "Due to not having the means to afford the course"
- Advice is never in plural. You can, however, use "pieces of advice" to express the same idea.
- Generally when talking about a skill, we say that the skill improved, rather than that we improved a skill. Hence why "My singing approved" instead of "I improved my singing". It's not wrong, per se, it just sounds a little awkward.
- 'Committed' is the adjectival form of the noun 'commitment'
- "To give 110%" is a common way to say that you always put in your best effort. If you want to stay more formal, you could say "I dedicate myself entirely to the task at hand".
- The "since" sentence is missing a verb. I'm guessing "joining", but it could also be "working with" or "studying with"
- I wouldn't use a sentence saying "I don't know about my progress" because it undermines your application. You don't need it. Be proud and confident!
- You have to be careful using "to take advantage" as it can sound negative (like you are exploiting something). I prefer the term "to make the most of" something.

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