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Hello friends,
I am very sleep today. I still can not open :(
I want to talk about my work I did to you...
I am an accountant but I am responsible for shipment, export, pre-accounting and other administrative affairs.I also have workers and bosses in the factory I work with, for a total of 10 people. All of the administrative work is up to me. Unfortunately, we have 2 bosses and we never agree with one, he's really bad.
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Hello friends,I am very sleepy today. I still cannot open (my eyes) :(
I want to talk about the work I did my work I did to you...
I am an accountant, and but I am responsible for shipment, export, pre-accounting and other administrative affairs as well.I also have ten colleagues, including workers and bosses in the factory I work with, for a total of 10 people. All of the administrative work is handled by me up to me. Unfortunately, we have two bosses and we never agree with each otherone. He's really nasty.
Hi Burak,
How are you? Just a few suggestions for you...
1) I assume you mean that you cannot open your eyes, as you mentioned how sleepy you are.
2) "my work I did" sounds unnatural as "my" and "I" both refer to you as the worker. The meaning is repeated.
3) I assume these ten people work in the same company as you? I used the word "colleagues" to describe all of them.
4) "up to me" has the meaning that you have the right to decide on a matter. I changed the phrase to "handled by me".
Hope this helps.
Do keep writing !
Cheers,
Lance
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