It's gonna be all bright (Please, could you correct it? Thanks a lot)
It reminds me Jimmy Cliff's song, do you know? " It's gonna be all bright, bright, a sunshine day."
My wife made me a surprise, however to tell you this story, I need to backward yesterday.
We went out to a party at night. It was about 1 a.m. when we decided to go home. She was driving because I've drunk some beer and we shouldn't drive when we had consumed alcoholic drinks.
I noticed that it wasn't our way to home so I asked her where were we going to?
She told me it was a surprised but after few seconds she got in laughs and said: "we are going to a trip but I don't know how to get there and so, you have to give me directions."
It was funny because her gift was discovered out sooner than she had intended to.
By the way, maybe you are thinking about my clothes... yes, she forgot almost everything at home.
However, the most important is that place is very nice and peaceful and everything is right as a brightness day.. a sunshine day.
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It's gonna be a bright day (Please, could you correct it? Thanks a lot)
It reminds me of Jimmy Cliff's song, do you know? " It's gonna be a bright, bright, sunshiny day."My wife gave me a surprise. However, to tell you this story, I need to go back to yesterday.
We went out to a party at night. It was about 1 a.m. when we decided to go home. She was driving because I had drunk some beer and we shouldn't drive when we have consumed alcoholic drinks.
I noticed that it wasn't our normal way home, so I asked her where we were going?
She told me it was a surprise, but after a few seconds she started to laugh and said: "We are going on a trip but I don't know how to get there and so, you have to give me directions."
It was funny because I discovered her gift sooner than she had intended.
By the way, maybe you are thinking about my clothes... yes, she forgot almost everything at home.
However, the most important point is that that place was very nice and peaceful and everything was as right as a fine day... a day full of sunshine.
A nice story. You could do more to explain more about the details concerning where your wife arranged to bring you to, it would add more meaning to the story.
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