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What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and companies to shopping online ? Nowadays lots of the people prefer to do shopping online.There are lots of advantages of it as well as disadvantages.Lets look at some o them : People who buy staff online save lots of the time ,because they dont search hours in streets looking one by one different shops.The most of the online shops are offer huge sorts of products,so you can find everything that you need in one place.It is disadvantages at the same time,esspecially for women.We cant try on hundreds of clothes,looking to the mirror ceremony in every shops also impossible when you are shopping online) Another advantages is no one disturbs you when you are choosing clothes at the shops no one try to influence you and your decision,you look and choose yourself what you want. For companies it is also comortable they dont open shops,dont pay for rent and employees there.They just keep one stock and sell from there.Including shipping and VAT to the cost decreeses their costs as well.Disadvantages may be for them with customs,not all products arrive to the customer because of different countries governments and their rules that can tabu some types of products.All this situations creats unsatisfied customers and influence companies reputation which reduce the sales of the company. I would be glad to know your short opinion about this topic too)

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Hi there, here are my corrections. I have corrected the English and left the structure as you have written it.  I hope this helps, let me know if you have any questions!

For companies it is also comfortable that they don't have to open shops, dont or pay for rent and employees there.They just keep oneall their stock on one platform (this is a good phrase to mean that their stock is all sold in one place - the website)and sell from there. Including shipping and VAT to in (always 'include something in something')the cost decreases their costs as well. The disadvantages may be for them may lie with customers, not all products arrive to reach the customer because of regulations in different countries, for some governments and their rules that can tabu some a certain type s of product s may be taboo. All this of these issues can result in unsatisfied customers,('can result in' is a better phrase that 'create'.  Create is better when it is used just with an abstract noun - 'This can create dissatisfaction') situations creats and which in turn can(this is a good way to link sentences meaning that something causes something else) influence companies a company's reputation causing a reduction in sales.(Because you have already used the word 'which' in the sentence, just using the 'ing' form - 'causing' - is a good way of joining two sentences without repeating 'which') which reduce the sales of the company.

I would be glad to know your short opinion about this topic too)
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What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Nowadays lots of the people prefer to do shopping online.There are lots of advantages of it as well as disadvantages.Lets look at some of them :

People who buy staff online can save lots of the time ,because they dont search   （have to spend hours shopping in streets）hours in streets looking one by one different shops.The most of the online shops are offer  （offering）huge sorts of products,so you can find everything that you need in one place.It is（has） disadvantages at the same time,esspecially for women.We cant try on hundreds of clothes,looking to the mirror ceremony in every shops also impossible when you are shopping online) Another advantages is that no one disturbs you when you are choosing clothes at the shops no one try to influence you and your decision,（这也太中式英语了吧TNT...）you look and choose yourself what you want.

For companies it is also comortable they dont open shops,dont pay for rent and employees there.They just keep one stock and sell from there.Including shipping and VAT to the cost decreeses their costs as well.Disadvantages may be for them with customs,not all products arrive to the customer because of different countries governments and their rules that can tabu some types of products.All this situations creats unsatisfied customers and influence companies reputation which reduce the sales of the company.

I would be glad to know your short opinion about this topic too)（好难改...）
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Hi there, here is the first part of my corrections. The second part is coming!

What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping (always 'advantages OF something')for individuals and companies? to shopping online ?

Nowadays, lots of the people prefer to do shopping online.There are lots of advantages of it to this as well as disadvantages. (always a space after a full-stop or comma in English, and there is no space before it)Lets look at some of them: (no space before a colon)

People who buy staff products ('stuff' is very informal, so for an essay products is more appropriate)online save lots of the time because they don't(always an apostrophe in don't) have to search for hours in streets looking in different shops one by one. different shops.The Most of the online shops are offer huge sorts a huge range (sorts is also informal. a great word with products is 'range')of products, (always a space after a comma)so you can find everything that you need in one place. It is There are also disadvantages at the same time, especially for women. We can't(always an apostrophe in can't) try on hundreds of clothes, looking to The ceremonial ritual of looking in (ritual is a really good word to describe something you always do)the mirror ceremony in every shops is also impossible when you are shopping online. Another advantages is that no-one disturbs you when you are choosing clothes at the shops online, and no-one tries to influence you and your decision, you look and choose yourself what you want.

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