Writing room
If I have such opportunity to build a writing and reading room of my dream, I will chose to make a small sitting place on the windowsill, with a few big and soft pillows. I wish I had an opportunity to observe what is happening outside and dream about something. There should be some beautiful photos or pictures which will remind me about some remarkable moment of my life. There should also be a small table for writing with nice sheets of paper and new beautiful colorful pens. As. My hobby is embroidering this place ought to be suitable for this too. This place should have a lamp for reading, writing or embroidering at dark time. Of course it should be warm, because I hate cold places and it will be very uncomfortable for me to spend time in such place.
I wish some time my dream would come true.
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Hi there, here are my corrections. I hope this is useful, let me know if you have any questions about them!
Because you are using your imagination and talking about a fantasy unreal situation, the sentences in the whole text are best in what we call the second conditional.
Anytime you use the word 'if' it should have the following structure:
'if + past simple' in the first part of the sentence, and then 'would' in the second part of the sentence instead of 'will'
Where you have 'should', should is only used to talk about real situations. For fantasy / imaginative / unreal situations you can use any of the following phrases:
'would need to'
'would have to'
'It would be necessary to have'
If I have had such an opportunity to build a writing and reading room of my dreams, I will would chose to make have a small sitting place on the windowsill for sitting, with a few big and soft pillows. I wish I had an would love to have the opportunity to observe what is happening outside and to dream about something. There should would be some beautiful photos or pictures which will would remind me about of ('remind of' is better s=for shorter things and moments)some remarkable memorable (memorable is a great word which goes well with moments)moments in of my life. There should would also be a small table for writing, with nice sheets of paper and new beautiful colorful pens. As my hobby is embroidering, this place ought to would need to be suitable for this too. This place should would have to have a lamp for reading, writing or embroidering at dark time when it was dark. Of course it should would have to be warm, because I hate cold places and it will would be very uncomfortable for me to spend time in such a place.I wish some time my dream would come true.
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