the day in colombia
Today in Colombia was an earthquake, I was so scary but nothing happen. The day is sunny but cold, I am in the work and I am boring, My son is in the kindergarden, today is his first day there, I miss him very much, I would like be with him, in the night I will go to my home for cook the lunch for tomorrow, the restaurant is very expensive in this neighborhood.
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the day in colombia
Today in Colombia, there was an earthquake, I was so scared but nothing happened. It* is sunny but cold right now, and I am in the work and I am bored, My son is in the kindergarten (Not kindergarDen).** Today is his first day there, I miss him very much, I would like be with him. Tonight, I will go to my home to cook the lunch for tomorrow, because restaurants*** are very expensive in this neighborhood.*You could say "today's weather is sunny but cold," or "it's sunny but cold right now."
**Too much run-on, you need to separate sentences.
***Plural, if you are talking about many restaurants.
So in all, good job! There are grammar mistakes here and there, and only one spelling mistake, but it's actually very understandable!
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I would recommend you to try to use the conjunction "and" instead of the comma sometimes (for example: Today is his first day there and I miss him very much. ), this makes the reading less tiring. I hope I've helped!
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the day in colombia
Today in Colombia there was an earthquake, I was so scared but nothing happened. The day is sunny but cold, I am at work and I am bored. My son is in the kindergarten, today is his first day there, I miss him very much, I would like to be with him, in the night I will go to my home to cook the lunch for tomorrow, the restaurant is very expensive in this neighborhood.Want to progress faster?
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