My best friend ❤️❤️❤️
Hi ❤️ I am Sasha. I am 13 years old. I am from Belarus. I have a lot of friends. But I have one indispensable friend. It is my best friend-Polina.She is 12 years old.She is good artist and hardworking dancer. I love her so much.She never throw in a difficult moment. She never lie to me. And I always go for a walk with her and I love to spend time with her.It is so funny [emoji][emoji] We always invite each other on the our b-day ❤️ And give presents ) I LOVE HER . MY BESTIE ❤️❤️❤️ please add a comment. Thanks [emoji][emoji]
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My best friend ❤️❤️❤️
Hi ❤️ I am Sasha. I am 13 years old. I am from Belarus. I have a lot of friends. But I have one indispensable friend. It is my best friend, Polina. She is 12 years old. She is a good artist and a hardworking dancer. I love her so much. She never throws in the towel [1] in a difficult moment. She never lies to me. And I always go for walks with her, and I love to spend time with her. It is so much fun [2]. [emoji][emoji] We always invite each other on the our b-days ❤️ And give presents ) I LOVE HER . MY BESTIE ❤️❤️❤️ Please add a comment. Thanks [emoji][emoji][1] I could not understand "She never throws in a difficult moment". So I suggested an idiom, "throw in the towel", which means "to give up". The idiom comes from boxing. When a boxer cannot fight anymore, his trainer throws a towel or sponge into the ring to signify that the fight is over.
[2] I am not sure, but I think you meant "fun" (весёлый) rather than "funny" (смешной).
My added comments are:
(1) You should try using contractions in informal writing. Examples: "Hi, I'm Sasha. I'm 13 years old." . . . "It's my best friend, Polina. She's 12 years old"; and
(2) You write extremely well. Congrats!
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