"Increasing the price of petrol is the best way for our future?" Hi, recently I always write some essay for IELTS writing, yes I'm tired. lol So, today's topic is "Increasing the price of petrol is t

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"Increasing the price of petrol is the best way for our future?" Hi, recently I always write some essay for IELTS writing, yes I'm tired. lol So, today's topic is "Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Let me know if you have time for checking my essay :) Nowadays, there is a common thing that people have cars for their life in society. In addition, a way for using cars depends on people for going to job, having traveling, moving products place to place so on. However, what is the best idea to solve pollution problems with decreasing number of traffic in our life? Some people say that increasing the cost of petrol is the best solution for that. I disagree with this idea because even if the price of petrol is increasing, technology can be get through it as a long term fuel consumption, then we still have growing number of traffic in our life. In this essay, I will mention about this any solutions with some examples. Firstly, we need to prompt people choose public transportation rather than automobiles. In other words, government should creative them as plenty of services for citizens. If we have a complete subway lines in our social life, people are choosing it for going to work, shopping, visiting any places, which means number of cars can be decreasing and then car polluting might be better than before. Another reason why I disagree with this is that we can restrict people for these problems by raising tax of automobiles. This means that government should control number of people are making automobile exhaust by pushing more high cost to them. A solution is for the government have responsibility for making some new laws to people need to spend more money for having automobiles. In conclusion, if we want to prevent these problems for growing traffic and pollution problems, it is necessary to provide public transportation as a good supply, while people avoid to have some automobiles if government increase tax for them. Personally, we can not diminish these problems unless making a new ways instead of increasing the price of petrol and government should put pressure on people to show high cost.

"Increasing the price of petrol is the best way for our future?"

Hi, recently I always write some essay for IELTS writing, yes I'm tired. lol
So, today's topic is
"Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Let me know if you have time for checking my essay :)

Nowadays, there is a common thing that people have cars for their life in society. Cars and other vehicles have become indispensable in society. People depend on cars for work, leisure, and transportation of goods In addition, a way for using cars depends on people for going to job, having traveling, moving products place to place so on. However, what is the best idea to solve pollution problems with decreasing number of traffic in our life? However, we must now face the growing problem of traffic and air pollution from vehicles. What are our options? Some people say that increasing the cost of petrol is the best solution for that. I disagree with this idea because even if the price of petrol is increasing, technology can be get through it as a long term fuel consumption, then we still have growing number of traffic in our life. Some people think that increasing the cost of petrol is the best solution. I disagree with this idea because even if the price of petrol were to increase (not sure your meaning in this part)..... This would have no effect on the number of vehicles on the road. In this essay, I will mention about this any solutions with some examples. I will discuss a few alternative solutions that would be more effective.

Firstly, we need to prompt people choose public transportation rather than automobiles. In other words, government should creative them as plenty of services for citizens. If we have a complete subway lines in our social life, people are choosing it for going to work, shopping, visiting any places, which means number of cars can be decreasing and then car polluting might be better than before. First of all, we need to encourage people to choose public transportation over relying on private transportation. In other words, government should ensure that people have easy access to public transportation. If we have an effective subway system, people will be able to use this form of transportation for work as well as leisure. Tourists will also conveniently use this form of transportation to visit many places. These would be excellent solutions for reducing traffic and pollution problems in the long term.

Another reason why I disagree with this is that we can restrict people for these problems by raising tax of automobiles. This means that government should control number of people are making automobile exhaust by pushing more high cost to them. A solution is for the government have responsibility for making some new laws to people need to spend more money for having automobiles. Another alternative to raising the price of petrol is to increase automobile tax. Creating some limits as to how many people will purchase automobiles by increasing consumer costs through taxation is an effective solution for governments to implement.

In conclusion, if we want to prevent these problems for growing traffic and pollution problems, it is necessary to provide public transportation as a good supply, while people avoid to have some automobiles if government increase tax for them. Personally, we can not diminish these problems unless making a new ways instead of increasing the price of petrol and government should put pressure on people to show high cost. In conclusion, if we want to prevent growing traffic and pollution problems, governments can ensure that reliable public transportation is accessible to the public. In addition, implementing an increase in vehicle tax will discourage and reduce private car ownership. I believe that these two solutions in the long run will be more effective than simply increasing the price of petrol.

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