Hi Martyna,

It's cold in most of Europe the moment!  Is your photograph of Zakopane? I went there once in summer but never in winter.

I've done two corrections - one is basic and the other is using a more poetic style. 

Winter

In my country it's snowing. Everything is white - trees, streets, houses. It is beautiful but very cold. I like winter and snow but I don't like it when I am sick. Winter lasts too long! I would like to have some sun. ;)

Winter

In my country it's snowing. Everything is white - the trees, the streets, the houses. It is incredibly beautiful but so very cold. I like winter and snow but I don't like not when I am sick. Winter lasts too long! I would like I am dying to have some sun. ;)