Letter practice for CAE exam
Dear Sir,
I am writing on behalf of the members of this countryside area, who are widely grateful for the fundings we are to receive as it was recently announced, and to suggest a few possible improvements.
It has been a long time since our area was in need of sport facilities. The neighbours claimed for secure rooms where keep the young people fit and amused, and even more relentlessly having that our current facilities were unexistent or did not fit their purpose any more. This was the case of the local swimming pool and the football pitch.
In order to cover all the needs, there are some facilities targeted as of capital importance. Firstly, our area is famous for its climbing caves and cliffes, but those are usually hazardous for unexperienced people, therefore a climbing wall with harnesses and security net would be of great utility. There should also be built a multisport centre where people could be able to play instead of performing those activities on the streets. Finally, the local suwimming pool needs to be improved after several years of neglection.
We consider ourselves an active society and so it is the younger part of us, who, unfortunately, has spent their leussire time pactising sports and training themselves in unacceptable places. New facilities will show them to enjoy sportying in safetier ways and improvetheir training process while socialising. We trust that you will consider our suggestions aiming to upgrade our area.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Graham.
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Letter practice for CAE exam
Dear Sir,I am writing on behalf of the members of this local rural area, who are wildly grateful for the funds we are to receive as was recently announced, and to suggest a few possible improvements.
For a long time, our area has been in need of sports facilities. Local people have clamoured(?) for a safe* area where to keep the young people fit and amused, and even more relentlessly have complained that our current facilities are non-existent or are not fit their purpose any more. This was the case of the local swimming pool and the football pitch.
In order to cover all these needs, there are some facilities targeted as of capital importance. Firstly, our area is famous for its climbing caves and cliffs, but those are usually hazardous to the inexperienced, therefore a climbing wall with harnesses and security net would be of great utility. There should also be built a multi-sport centre where people could play instead of performing those activities on the streets. Finally, the local swimming pool needs to be improved after several years of neglect.
We consider ourselves an active society and so it is the younger part of us, who, unfortunately, has spent their leisure time practising sports and training themselves in unacceptable places. New facilities will let them enjoy sports in safer ways and improve their training while socialising. We trust that you will consider our suggestions aiming to upgrade our area.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Graham.
*a secure room is a prison cell or asylum cell. (it is secure for those outside) (but there are more out than in?).
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Letter practice for CAE exam
Dear Sir,I am writing on behalf of the members of this countryside area, who are
It has been a long time since our area was in need of (some) sport facilities. The neighbours claimed for secure rooms where keep the young people fit and amused, and even more relentlessly having that our current facilities were unexistent or did not fit their purpose any more. This was the case of the local swimming pool and the football pitch. > The people here feel that they is a need of some indoor facilities where the young people of this area can go to for some sports or exercise as well as serving as a place where they can socialize. This matter is particularly urgent because there are currently no such facilities in our area, with the one we are using now for that purpose being not longer suitable. This is also the case with our local swimming pool and football pitch.
In order to cover all the needs, there are some facilities targeted as of capital importance.> In case the funding is not enough to cover all the needs, we have prioritised some facilities that are of greater importance to us over the others.
Firstly, our area is famous for its climbing caves and cliffes, but those are usually hazardous for unexperienced people, therefore a climbing wall with harnesses and security net would be of great utility. > Our area is famous for cave and cliff climbing, and its a sport that is dangerous for those who are inexperienced. So, we first have to have a climbing wall where the locals can practice their climbing skills, with harnesses and security nets in place to prevent any untoward incident.
There should also be built a multisport centre where people could be able to play instead of performing those activities on the streets. Finally, the local suwimming pool needs to be improved after several years of neglection.
>Second, we hope that a multisport centre will be built here, where people can play games there instead of doing that on the streets, which is the case now.
> Last, our local swimming pool has to be refurbished after many years of neglect.
We consider ourselves an active society and so it is the younger part of us, who, unfortunately, has spent their leussire time pactising sports and training themselves in unacceptable places
> We like to see ourselves as a conscientious community. So, it is unfortunate for us to see the young people of our community having to spend their leisure time, to practice their sports and to train in places that are not appropriate for such activities.
New facilities will show them to enjoy sportying in safetier ways and improvetheir training process while socialising. We trust that you will consider our suggestions aiming to upgrade our area.
> These new facilities will allow them to play and enjoy the sports they love in a safe environment, a place where they can train or play, or just a place for them to socialize with their friends. We trust you will consider our suggestions, which are given in the interests of aiming toward a better sporting cum recreational infrastructure for our community.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Graham.
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