My firts trip abroad
Last year, I went to Punta Cana in Dominican Republic. It was my first trip abroad, I chose that place because I saw a lot of photos and I imagined Punta Cana like a paradise. By airplane, it is a five-hour journey from Lima to Punta Cana. When the airplane was landing I could see an awesome aerialview, cristal water and white sand. At the first time I had some problems to breathe due to the climate was humid, few days after I was breathing easily.
Then I checked in at hotel which gave me an upgrade room, my room was located in front of the beach. My first morning was incredible I could see and heard the sea. After breakfast I went to the beach and enjoyed the sun and the Caribbean sea. I enrolled in different tours and I met people from Europe.
On the other hand I had bad experiences such as when I tasted the hotel food, some meals were strange to me. In spite of that, I really loved my trip. I promised going around the Caribbean beaches.
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My first trip abroad
Last year, I went to Punta Cana in Dominican Republic. It was my first trip abroad. I chose that place because I saw a lot of photos and I imagined Punta Cana to be like a paradise. By airplane, it is a five-hour journey from Lima to Punta Cana. When the airplane was landing I could see an awesome aerialview of crystal water and white sand. At the first time I had some problems to breathing due to the humid climate was humid, but after a few days after I was breathing easily.Then I checked into at a hotel which gave me an upgrade room. My room was located in front of the beach. My first morning was incredible because I could see and heard the sea. After breakfast I went to the beach and enjoyed the sun and the Caribbean sea. I enrolled in took different tours and I met people from Europe.
On the other hand, I had a bad experiences such as when I tasted the hotel food because some meals were strange to me. In spite of that, I really loved my trip. I promised going around the Caribbean beaches. ( I'm sorry but I do not understand this last sentence.)
Good job Gasdaly. Except for the last sentence I easily understood what you were saying.
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My first trip abroad
Last year, I went to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic. It was my first trip abroad. I chose that place because I saw a lot of photos and I imagined Punta Cana to be like a paradise. By airplane, it is a five-hour journey from Lima to Punta Cana. When the airplane was landing I could see an awesome aerial view, crystal water and white sand. At first, I had some problems to breathe since the climate was humid, but a few days later I was breathing easily.Then I checked in at a hotel which gave me an upgraded room. This room was located in front of the beach. My first morning was incredible; I could see and hear the sea. After breakfast I went to the beach and enjoyed the sun and the Caribbean sea. I joined in different tours and met people from Europe.
On the other hand, I had bad experiences such as when I tasted the hotel food; some meals were strange to me. In spite of that, I really loved my trip. I promised myself to go around the Caribbean beaches.
Very well written!
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