San Francisco Cioppino
I tried to make cioppino tonight. I really wanted to eat it. 2month ago, I went to San Francisco and had wonderful cioppino at a famous local restaurant. That was the best stew I have ever had in my life. So, sometimes, the taste and the smell come to my mind suddenly. I decided to make my cioppino, and read recipe deeply, and watched YouTube video that a lady is cooking. But The taste was not like cioppino I ate in San Francisco. Something was different. That's what only professionals can do. Although it was unsuccessful today, I will try soon.
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San Francisco Cioppino
I tried to make cioppino tonight. I really wanted to eat it. 2 Two months ago, I went to San Francisco and had wonderful cioppino at a famous local restaurant. That was the best stew I have ever had in my life. So, sometimes, the taste and the smell come to my mind suddenly. I decided to make my cioppino, and read recipe deeply carefully*, and watched a YouTube video that showed a lady is cooking it. But the taste was not like cioppino I ate in San Francisco. Something was different. That's what something only professionals can are able to do.** Although it was unsuccessful today, I will try again soon.*The use of an adverb is correct here, but when we "read deeply" into things, it has the connotation that we are analyzing it for meaning, and that isn't the case here.
**This sentence was not technically incorrect, but I think this is what you actually meant, so I wordsmithed it in blue.
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