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My loyal friend Seven months ago I adopted a dog from the street, I called him Simón. He has the most grateful eyes that I have ever seen. His hair is brown and his ears are black (I'm in love with this detail). With the vet, we suposse that he is 1 year, a puppy, and I know it because he is very active and playful. I love when he is waiting for me after a long day at the college or at the hospital (where I do the practices). My life turn 360 degrees after I met him. I had to take some responsabilities and cares. But I'm grateful for that. And I know it.. He is the most loyal friend that exist!

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My loyal friend

Seven months ago I adopted a dog, I called him Simón. He has the most grateful eyes that I have ever seen. His hair is brown and his ears are black (I'm in love with this detail).


The vet and I think he is a one year old  a puppy.  He is very active and playful.


I love when he is waiting for me after a long day at  college or at the hospital (where I do clinicals).


My life turned  360 degrees after I met him. I was happy that I had to take some responsibility and care for him.    He is the most loyal friend that I've ever had!!

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My loyal friend

Seven months ago I adopted a dog from the street, who I called him Simón. He has the most grateful eyes that I have ever seen. His hair is brown and his ears are black (I'm in love with this these details).
With the vet, we supposse that he is 1 year old, a puppy, and I know it because he is very active and playful.
I love when he is waiting for me after a long day at the college or at the hospital (where I do the practices).
My life turned 360 degrees after I met him. I had to take on some responsabilities responsibilities and cares duties, but I'm grateful for that it. 
And I know it.. He is the most loyal friend that exists!

Glad you've found a beautiful, loyal puppy! :D Great writing!

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My loyal friend

Seven months ago I adopted a dog from the street, <-- change this comma into a period I called him Simón. He has the most grateful eyes that I have ever seen. His hair is brown and his ears are black (I'm in love with this detail).
With the vet, We and the vet suposse suppose that he is 1 year old - a puppy - and I know it because he is very active and playful.
I love when he is waiting for me after a long day at the college or at the hospital (where I do the practices).
My life turned 360 degrees after I met him. I had to take some responsibilities and cares, but I'm grateful for that.
And I know it.. He is the most loyal friend that exists!
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I like dogs. Can you share with us the photo of Simon?

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