Our Vacation to Yogyakarta
Two weeks ago, my friend and I visited Yogyakarta, one of famous city in Indonesia. We stayed for 2 days in a hotel in main street called Malioboro. We planned this vacation since around 3 months ago as we work in 2 different office so difficult for us to match the schedule.
In Yogyakarta, we tried some of local food, such as gudeg and traditional noodle. Gudeg is fermented raw jackfruit, the taste is sweet and usually serve with rice and boiled egg.
We need more than just 2 days to explore more about Yogyakarta. We have planned to our next vacation.
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Our Vacation to Yogyakarta
Two weeks ago, my friend and I visited Yogyakarta, one of the famous cities in Indonesia. We stayed for 2 days in a hotel on a main street called Malioboro. We had planned this vacation for around 3 months ago as we work in 2 different offices so it is difficult for us to match our schedules.In Yogyakarta, we tried some of local food, such as gudeg and traditional noodles. Gudeg is fermented raw jackfruit; the taste is sweet and it is usually served with rice and boiled eggs (OR: A boiled egg.).
We need more than just 2 days to explore more about Yogyakarta. We have planned to our next vacation.
This sounds like a fun vacation! :-) Your English is really fluent, there were just a few errors with the tense. I hope my corrections are clear and useful.
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