Day 9 Write about something for which you feel strongly
Life is very unstable and expects us to be flexible in our behavior and attitudes all the time. It is really helpful to be open-minded and outgoing. This can protect you from getting distressed if you fail attempting to do something. However, you still should have some strong beliefs which back you up when you are going through hard times.
In my point of view, each person should understand that being proactive and responsible for your own choices is a key to a happy life. I feel strongly that we not only should do mundane jobs, but carve out time for activities that bring us joy. It can be just a song or a cup of favorite tea, a walk in a park or a fitness training, an interesting book or time with your loves one.
Secondly, I am sure that an education system with marks is unnecessary nowadays and it disapproved itself. I feel strongly that marks at school should be abandoned. Instead of it we should develop a new way of education where students study not to please someone, but because they are motivated and interested in a subject.
Finally, I believe it is never late to change your career or a way of life you live. We do not owe anything to anyone, we are free and only old patterns in our head limit us.
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Day 9 Write about something for which you feel strongly
Life is very changeable and constantly expects us to be flexible in our behavior and attitudes. It is really helpful to be open-minded and outgoing. This can protect you from getting distressed if you fail attempting to do something. However, you still should have some strong beliefs to support you through hard times.In my point of view, one should understand that being proactive and responsible for one's own choices is a key to a happy life. I feel strongly that we not only should do mundane jobs, but also make time for leisure. It can be just a song or a cup of our favorite tea, a walk in a park or a fitness training, an interesting book or time with our loved ones.
Secondly, I am sure that an education system with grading is these days obsolete and has proved itself unfit for purpose. I feel strongly that marks at school should be abandoned. Instead, we should develop a new way of education where students study not to please others, but because they are motivated and interested in a subject.
Finally, I believe it is never too late to change your career or your way of life. We do not owe anything to anyone, we are free and only the old patterns in our heads limit us.
Very well written!
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