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The travelers and the plane tree Two travelers, worn down by the heat of the sun, decided to throw themselves on the ground to rest under a large plane tree. While they were resting under its shade, one man said to the other: -What useless tree this is! I see that it doesn't bear fruit, and I think we cannot use its wood for anything. -Don't be so ungrateful! rustled the tree in reply. I am being extremely useful, shielding you from the hot sun. And you dare to call me useless and unhelpful! Always, we must appreciate and show gratitude for the goods received. Big or small, they're all for our benefit.

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Thanks a lot Wenwei!
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The travelers and the plane tree

Two travelers, worn down by the heat of the sun, decided to throw themselves on the ground to rest under a large plane tree. While they were resting under its shade, one man said to the other:
"What a useless tree this is! I can see that it doesn't bear fruit, and I think we cannot use its wood for anything".
"Don't be so ungrateful!" rustled the tree in reply, " I have been am being extremely useful to you, shielding you from the hot sun. And how you dare you  to call me useless and unhelpful!"

Always, We  must always  appreciate and show gratitude for any good deed the goods we received. Big or small, they're all just for our own benefit.
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This is very well written! My only corrections are What a useless tree this is! And don't forget to put quotation marks around your dialogue. Other than that, your writing voice reflects the kind of writing style you need for this kind of piece.

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