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Shopping! I am going to go shopping with my children. We will eat lunch. My daughter want to buy wool scarf. She useally have many time for her shopping. Today I hope she decide buy her wool scarf quickly. 今日はこれから子供たちを連れて買い物に行きます。 ついでにお昼はそこで簡単に済ませる予定~。 目的は、娘のマフラーです。 娘の買い物は、結構時間がかかるので、いつもたいへーん(^_^;) 今日は早く決まるといいな…

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Shopping!

I am going shopping with my children.
We will eat lunch.
My daughter wants to buy a wool scarf.
She usually takes a lot of time when she shops.
Today I hopes she decides to buy her wool scarf quickly.

今日はこれから子供たちを連れて買い物に行きます。
ついでにお昼はそこで簡単に済ませる予定~。
目的は、娘のマフラーです。
娘の買い物は、結構時間がかかるので、いつもたいへーん(^_^;)
今日は早く決まるといいな…

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Shopping!

I am going to go   do shopping with my children. 
We will eat lunch.(I'd prefer We are going to have lunch together)
My daughter wants to buy a wool scarf.
She usually have many      spends a lot of time on her shopping.
Today I hope she decides  to   buy her wool scarf quickly.

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Shopping!

I am going to the shopping mall with my children.
We will eat lunch.
My daughter wants to buy a wool scarf.
She usually takes a long time to choose the one she likes.
Today I hope she would not take too long today.

今日はこれから子供たちを連れて買い物に行きます。
ついでにお昼はそこで簡単に済ませる予定~。
目的は、娘のマフラーです。
娘の買い物は、結構時間がかかるので、いつもたいへーん(^_^;)
今日は早く決まるといいな…

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