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Well done...and sorry about your hard day! -JY
Today was horrible
Have you ever felt so sad for all your acquaintances said you are meek? (I am confused as to what the previous sentence is supposed to say.)...Today I realized become acquainted that I did made a mistake, not a great big mistake, but a foolish infantil mistake. I don't know why but it seems for what, it's important to say that., thought. I'm an educated ion man but I had a moment in which I failed to do simple addition .din´t do a easy sum in a rare moment, The situation was: early in the afternoon I went to Father's clothes shopping for to help to my sister to sell anythings.We didn't have many change, ( that is to say the, same money, but in small denominations for customers paying in larger denominations), of value, so I went to other shops pings for to get change that for paper money. It was odyssey because any person nobody did, finally someone in some a grocery store helped me, and I went so fast quickly returned to father's shop, I delay had been gone several minutes. When I returned,, I gave a somebody the wrong money change, and lost some money. I don't feel sad for losing money though, it´s´was so I just feel dumb. for me, however.
Today was horrible
Have you ever felt so sad that for all your acquaintances said you are meek?...Today I learned become acquainted that I made did a mistake. Not a big great mistake, but a small infantil mistake. I don't know for what, it's important to say, thought (I'm confused as to what you want to say with this previous sentence). I'm a education man but didn´t do a easy sum in a rare moment,
You could say: I'm an educated man but I messed up some simple addition.
the situation was: early in the afternoon I went to my Father's clothing store shopping for to help to my sister to sell something anythings, we didn't have money change (that is to say the same money, but in small denominations of value), so I went to another other store shoppings for to change that paper money.
it was odyssey because anyperson did, finaly in some grocery store helped me, and I went so fast to father's shop, I delay several minutes. I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. I think you want to say is: "Someone in a grocery story finally helped me.. I went back to my father's shop, but I waited a few minutes."
When I arrived I gave the a wrong money change, and lost some money. I don't feel sad for the money, it´s was so dumb for me, however.
Buen trabaja. Continua escribiendo.
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