Journal assignment
This is part of my journal assignment. Could you correct them and/or give me better expressions please?
Social, cultural, and ritual use of pigs causes the endemic disease. One of the main reasons of this endemic disease is their cooking habits. This made me realize that I had almost forgotten the risk of seafood-related infectious diseases such as anisakiasis. However, I will not stop eating sashimi and sushi because these foods can fulfill my psychological need.
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Journal assignment
This is part of my journal assignment. Could you correct them it and/or give me better expressions please?Social, cultural, and ritual use of pigs can causes the endemic diseases. One of the main reasons of this these endemic diseases is their the cooking habits of pigs. *This made me realize that I had almost forgotten the risk of seafood-related infectious diseases such as anisakiasis*. However, I will not stop eating sashimi and sushi because these foods can fulfill my psychological needs.
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