I wanna fishing. My uncle always fishing, and he always tell me: "There is more to this sport than it seems". But the problem is that I don't like fish, this is crazzy, he teached me how to take a fi

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I wanna fishing. My uncle always fishing, and he always tell me: "There is more to this sport than it seems". But the problem is that I don't like fish, this is crazzy, he teached me how to take a fish, in the harbor you take a boat to go to sea, and you use a fishing pole with a bait, yes it's simple, but you need to have patience, too much patience. But in the end, if you don't stay seasick, you'll be a great day with your family or friends, or like me, with my uncle, everything beautiful, but everything change when I've to eat fish.

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I wanna go fishing.

My uncle always go fishing and he always tells me: "There is more to this sport than it seems". But the problem is that I don't like fish, this is crazy. He taught me how to catch a fish: in the harbor you take a boat to go to the sea and you use a fishing pole with a bait. Yes, it's simple, but you need to have patience, too much patience. But in the end, if you don't get seasick, you'll have a great day with your family or friends. Or like me, with my uncle, everything fine, but everything changes when I have to eat fish.

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I want to go fishing.

My uncle is always fishing, and he always tells me: "There is more to this sport than there seems". But the problem is that I don't like fish. This is crazy; he taught me how to take a fish, in the harbor you take a boat to go to sea, and you use a fishing pole with a bait, yes it's simple, but you need to have patience, too, much patience. But in the end, if you don't become seasick, you'll have a great day with your family or friends, or like me, with my uncle, everything beautiful, but everything changes when I have to eat fish.

Very well written!

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