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I'm learning for the CAE exam it would really help if somebody could look threw my texts Formal lettre Dear Sir I am an activ leader at scouts group Battasendas Capricorn Engiadina Bassa. We are a group of 7 leaders, who do all the work in their freetime without earning money. Our group has not that many members for that reason we would like to organisate a day where children can see what we do at the scouts. On that day we have planned to offer aclimbing trail. Unfourtunately we do not have enough material, because of that we want to ask your company to collaborate with us. If it is possible we would like to lend the material which is needed from you. We would also put your banner up on our members house and leave it also after that day hangen up. We are looking forward to working with you and your company together. Yours faithfully Leila Schmid AL Battasendas Capricorn Engadina Bassa

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I'm learning for the CAE exam it would really help if somebody could look through my texts

Formal letter
Dear Sir
I am an active leader at the scouts group Battasendas Capricorn Engiadina Bassa. We are a group of seven* leaders, who work in our free time without earning money.* Our group has not that many members. For that reason, we would like to organise a day where children can see what we do at the scouts. On that day we plan to offer a climbing trail.

Unfortunately we do not have enough materials, and because of that we want to ask your company to collaborate with us. If it is possible we would like to lend the material which is needed from you? We would also put your banner up in our members' houses and leave it hanging there for several days. 

We are looking forward to working together with your company.
Yours faithfully
Leila Schmid
AL Battasendas Capricorn Engadina Bassa

*normally, in written essays, it is usual to spell such small numbers.

*or, ... work, unpaid, in our free time.

Very well written!

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