A good date
Today, January 14, the date is good for my family. For 8 years I, along with her husband. 8 years ago, our family began to form. I have long thought, how to congratulate her husband, I decided to make a photo collage of good events that have occurred over the years. It turned out not bad. He liked this.
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A good date
Today, January 14, is a good day for my family. Eight years ago our family started forming. I have been thinking for a while on how to congratulate her(my?) husband and I decided to make a photo collage of the memorable events that have occurred over the years. It didn't turn out too bad. He liked it.Hello!
The paragraph doesn't explain whose husband you are talking about so you should include something otherwise it is a incomplete.
Memorable is a better word to use as it refers to good memories that you would want to take photos of.
Hope that helps!
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