Cover letter
Hello everyboy!
I would like to have your views about my cover letter. I am going to apply for a Prepatory class in Taiwan during this summer and I have to do a cover letter in english. here it is :
Dear sir,
I wish to apply for a position on the Prepratory Class for the Masters in International Business in Tainan, Taiwan.
I am currently in my third year of a Bachelors in International Trade and wish to work in international trade in my future career. Furthermore, I would like to continue my studies by attending a Masters in International Negotiating of Commercial Projects.
I have been studying Chinese for the past years and I would like to have the oportunity to further devlop this skill through a total immersion for a few months in a Chinese speaking country such as yours. Moreover, I would like to improve my working knowledge of English by attending a business english class as offered at the STUST University in Tainan.
I have already travelled to various foreign countries and have no trouble adapting to new cultures. These trips have reinforced my interest in international commerce.
Having a strong desire to improve my knowledge of the Asian markets and different business cultures, I am certain that your program will meet my needs.
I have worked in retail outlets over the last few years, mostly in telecommunications with the international French company SFR and PhoneHouse, both dealing in mobile phone technology.
Taking into consideration my past professional experience as well as a participation in your program, I really believe I will be able to reach my goals.
I sincerely hope that this letter has convinced you of my utmost motivation to attend this 2 month course at your University.
Sincerely yours.
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Cover letter
Hello everyboy!I would like to have your views about my cover letter. I am going to apply for a Prepatory class in Taiwan during
Dear sir,
I wish to apply for a position on the Prepratory Class for the Masters in International Business in Tainan, Taiwan.
I am currently in my third year of a Bachelors in International Trade and wish to work in international trade in my future career. Furthermore, I would like to continue my studies by attending a Masters in International Negotiating of Commercial Projects.
I have been studying Chinese for the past few (maybe write how many years you are studying it) years and I would like to have the oportunity to further devlop this skill through a total immersion for a few months in a Chinese speaking country such as yours. Moreover, I would like to improve my working knowledge of English by attending an English business class as offered at the STUST University in Tainan.
I have already travelled to various foreign countries and have no trouble adapting to new cultures. These trips have reinforced my interest in international commerce.
Having a strong desire to improve my knowledge of the Asian markets and different business cultures, I am certain that your program will meet my needs.
I have worked in retail outlets over the last
Taking into consideration my past professional experience as well as the potential
I sincerely hope that this letter has convinced you of my utmost motivation to attend this 2 month course at your University.
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Hi Nathalie
First of all, let me give a suggestion. I think the best persons which can help you in this way are professors or Postdocs familiar with admission processes and have read lots of cover letter. Since my situation is similar to you (I have applied to several universities and as a result I have written SoP, CV ) I give my opinion. But again I emphasize Professors or those working in academic environment are the best person. If you don't access to such people Google will definitely help you. Search the one of the following statements: "sample of academic cover letter" or "cover letter sample for univerisity".
Any way in my opinion you haven't given enough specific information about your background in business. For example you should mention mention any relevant research experience you have had or courses you have taken. I mean those related to business. Moreover I suggest you to contact the supervisor which you want to work under his/her supervision and if s/he agree mention the his/her name on your cover letter. Also you should try to avoid grammatical mistakes in your letter.
Hope this helps.
Good luck
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