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Things Sara does every day Sara wakes up at 8 a.m. She has breakfast at 8:30 a.m. She eats every day bread and drink coffee and milk. She likes milk! At 9 a.m. she starts her English study. She is studying Simple Present. She learns add "s" for the pronouns 'he, she, it'. She studies English for an hour. After she has a lunch and goes to work. Sara arrives at home at 6 p.m. When she arrives she doesn't do anything. Only thing she wants is watches TV on sofa. At 9 p.m. she has a dinner with her husband and their children. Couple has two children. Maria and Bob. Maria is 8 years old and Bob 10. Sara and her husband love the children! At 10 p.m. it's hour to sleep. Everybody go to bed.

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Things Sara does every day

Sara wakes up at 8 a.m.
She has breakfast at 8:30 a.m. She eats bread and drinks coffee with milk every day. She likes milk!
At 9 a.m. she starts her English studies. She is studying the Simple Present. She learns to add "s" for the pronouns 'he, she, it'.
She studies English for an hour. After that she has lunch and goes to work.
Sara arrives at home at 6 p.m. When she arrives she doesn't do anything. The only thing she wants is to watch TV on the sofa.
At 9 p.m. she has dinner with her husband and their children. The couple (they) have two children. Maria and Bob. Maria is 8 years old and Bob 10. Sara and her husband love their children!
At 10 p.m. it's time to sleep. Everybody goes to bed.

Hello Esther,

Some really good work here. I am not sure if you mean she has a drink of coffee and a drink of milk for breakfast or milk in her coffee. Remember we normally don't put articles (a, the) in front of meals.

Best wishes

Bob

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Things Sara does every day

Sara wakes up at 8 a.m.
She has breakfast at 8:30 a.m. She eats bread and drinks coffee with milk every day. She likes milk!
At 9 a.m  she starts her  studying English . She is studying Simple Present. She learns to add "s" for the to pronouns 'he, she, it'.
She studies English for an hour. Afterwards she has a lunch and goes to work.
Sara arrives at home at 6 p.m. When she arrives she doesn't do anything. The only thing she wants to do is watches TV on the sofa.
At 9 p.m. she has a dinner with her husband and their children. The couple has two children. Maria and Bob. Maria is eight years old and Bob is 10. Sara and her husband love their children!
At 10 p.m. it's hour time to sleep. Everybody goes to bed.

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