New Year's eve
I woke up at 9am and went to the kitchen to have my breakfast. I eat a bread and drunk a cup of yogurt. Then I got dressed and went out to my girlfriend's house to feed her cat - Amy - while she is traveling with her family. I took my mom with me to know her house and see Amy - my mom loves animals. After that, I drove to the supermarket to buy some groceries to the new year's eve. My mom intends to make a chicken pie and a mayonnaise salad for dinner so she bought chicken breast, palm heart, olive, tomato sauce, and also some fruits like pinapple, melon, watermelon, mango and some soda to drink. When we got home, I've helped my mom to store the food on the fridge and also cleaned the house while she was cooking the lunch. She made rice, beans, meat and a salad of tomatoes with cabbage. When we finished the lunch, I took a shower and now I am waiting until my brother come back from his friend house for us to eat dinner and go to the Paulista Avenue to see the new year's concert (show).
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New Year's eve
I woke up at 9am and went to the kitchen to have [my] breakfast. I ate some bread and drank a cup of yogurt. Then I [got] dressed and went out to my girlfriend's house to feed her cat, Amy, while she is away, traveling with her family. I took my mom with me to see the house and see Amy - my mom loves animals. After that, I drove to the supermarket to buy some groceries for new year's eve. My mom intends to make a chicken pie and a mayonnaise salad for dinner so she bought chicken breast, palm heart, olives, tomato sauce, and also some fruits like pineapple, melon, watermelon, mango and some soda to drink*. When we got home, I helped my mom to store the food in the fridge and also cleaned the house while she was cooking the lunch. She made rice, beans, meat and a salad of tomatoes with cabbage. When we finished the lunch, I took a shower and now I am waiting until my brother comes back from his friend house for us to eat dinner and go to Paulista Avenue to see the new year's concert (show).*or, some drinking soda.
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