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My recipe of pancake! I like cooking pancakes for breakfast. Uarally I cook pancake once a week! Perhaps you would ask me why only once a week? Because my daughter likes different breakfast everyday. I would share the way I cook pancake below. 1. Last night making paste and put a little yeast power into the paste; ( in hot summer you have to put this paste into refrigerator) 2. In the morning cuting green vegatables to small pieces and put them to your paste, I will add an egg. ( I add one vagables once time. ( I like spinach) 3. add some sesame and salt 4. put some oil to your pan and heat it 5. add some paste to pan and make it to a pancake. Can you understand me? I don't think so!

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My recipe for  of pancakes!

I like cooking pancakes for breakfast. Uarally  Usually I cook pancakes once a week! Perhaps you would   ask yourself: me Why only once a week? Because my daughter likes a different breakfast everyday. I would like to share the way I cook pancakes below.
1. Last night I was  making paste the batter and put a little bit of yeast power into it paste ; ( in hot summer you have to put this paste  batter into the refrigerator)
2. In the morning cuting  cut up  some green vegatables   vegetables into small pieces and put them into paste  the batter, I will add an egg. ( I add one vagables once  the vegetables one by one at a time. ( I like spinach)
3. add some sesame and salt
4. put some oil into your pan and heat it
5. add some paste  batter into the pan and make it to a  form a nice pancake.
Can you understand me? I don't think so!

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My recipe of pancake!

I like cooking pancakes for breakfast. UsualIy I cook pancakes once a week. Perhaps you would ask me why only once a week? Because my daughter likes different breakfast everyday. (Try not to ask questions when writing. Instead, write it like this)The reason I do this is because my daughter likes having a different breakfast everyday.

 I would like to share the way I make pancakes below.


1. The night before, I make the pancake paste and put a little yeast power into the paste. ( During the hot summer, you have to put this paste into a refrigerator)
2. In the morning, I cut up green vegetables to small pieces and add them to the paste. I also add an egg. (I usually add one vegetable to the paste. I especially like spinach)
3. I then add some sesame and salt
4. I put some oil in the pan and heat it
5. I then pour some paste into the pan and make a perfect pancake.

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-    Avoid asking yourself questions when writing. This is usually done on tv, when interviewers ask the people a question and then the person repeats the question THEN answers it. This is not desirable in writing. It could work when talking face to face, but definitely not in writing. You keep on working!

Can you understand me? I don't think so!

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