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二〇一七年一月七号 请帮我检查这些句子 1. 你几号去中国音乐会？星期四四月二号。几点？ 晚上七点半。When are you going to go to the Chinese music concert? On Thursday, 2d of April. At what time? 7:30 PM. 2. 你知道我的地址吗？不知道。那么我告诉你。Do you know my address? I don't know. I'll tell you then. 3. 两个月之后我们班的学生都去中国，他们明年六月回国。After two months all the students in our group go to China, they will come back in next April. 4. 他两年以前来中国了学习。现在他的汉语说得很好。Two years ago he came to China to study. Now he speaks Chinese very well. 谢谢啊

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二〇一七年一月七号

请帮我检查这些句子

1. 你几号去看中国音乐会(i am not sure, 是应该说去中国看音乐会or it is called 中国音乐会？)？

四月二号星期四。(the way to express address in Chinese is different from English.→ Year.mouth.day )

几点？

晚上七点半。

When are you going to go to the Chinese music concert? On Thursday, 2d of April. At what time? 7:30 PM.


2. 你知道我的地址吗？

不知道。

那么我告诉你。

Do you know my address? I don't know. I'll tell you then.

3. 两个月之后我们班的学生都去了中国，他们明年六月回国。After two months all the students in our group go to China, they will come back in next April.
4. 他两年以前来中国学习。现在他的汉语说得很好。Two years ago he came to China to study. Now he speaks Chinese very well.

谢谢啊

喜欢你最后在谢谢后面加了"啊"，因为这个语气词很亲切。

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二〇一七年一月七号

请帮我检查这些句子

1. 你几号去中国音乐会？四月二号星期四。几点？ 晚上七点半。When are you going to go to the Chinese music concert? On Thursday, 2d of April. At what time? 7:30 PM.
2. 你知道我的地址吗？不知道。那么我告诉你。Do you know my address? I don't know. I'll tell you then.
3. 两个月之后我们班的学生都去中国，他们明年六月回国。After two months all the students in our group go to China, they will come back in next April.
4. 他两年以前来中国学习。现在他的汉语说得很好。Two years ago he came to China to study. Now he speaks Chinese very well.

谢谢啊
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二〇一七年一月七号

请帮我检查这些句子

1. 你几号去中国音乐会？星期四四月二号。几点？ 晚上七点半。When are you going to go to the Chinese music concert? On Thursday, 2d of April. At what time? 7:30 PM.
2. 你知道我的地址吗？不知道。那么我告诉你。Do you know my address? I don't know. I'll tell you then.
3. 两个月之后我们班的学生都去中国，他们明年六月回国。After two months all the students in our group go to China, they will come back in next April.
4. 他两年以前来中国了学习。现在他的汉语说得很好。Two years ago he came to China to study. Now he speaks Chinese very well.

谢谢啊

了   это не прошедшее время , он акцентировает совершение действия

тут желательно без 了

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你的中文学得很不错:)

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