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please check this sentence Question Today,some companies allow their employees to wear casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts. Do you think the number of such companies will increase in the future? MY opinion I think that companies allowing their employees to wear casual clothes will increase in the future. First,wearing casual clothes is very comfortable for employees. As they wear casual clothes,they can make it more jobs. Second,wearing casual clothes reduce electric fee.For instance When it is during summer,we use air conditioner in order to cool a room all day long.In the result of that,electric bill increase more. However wearing casual clothes is more comfortable than formal style like suits.We can stop using air conditioner all day . there are reasons why I think companies allowing their employees to wear casual clothes will increase in the future.

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Question
Today These days, some companies allow their employees to wear casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts.
Do you think the number of such companies will increase in the future?

MY opinion
I think that companies allowing their employees to wear casual clothes will increase in the future.
First, wearing casual clothes is very comfortable for employees. As they wear casual clothes,they can make it more jobs.
Second, wearing casual clothes reduces the electricity fee bill. For instance When it is during summer, we use air conditioner conditioning in order to cool a room all day long. In the As a result of that, the electricity bill increases more.
However wearing casual clothes is more comfortable than a formal style like suits. We can stop using air conditioner conditioning all day .
there These are the reasons why I think companies allowing their employees to wear casual clothes will increase in the future.


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"These days" sounds unusual but it is the idiomatic English.

they can make it more jobs - do you mean "they can work more different jobs" or "there can be more jobs for people" ?

"Air conditioner" - use either "the air conditioner" or just "air conditioning".  "Air conditioner" would be used to talk about a single AC machine; "air conditioning" would be used to talk about the whole system in a building.

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I wear casual clothes to work and it is really nice in hot weather to wear shorts and t-shirt to work!

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