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There are both positive and negative influences of technology on work
The most obvious advantage that technology has brought is that it makes our work more efficient and effective. With those cutting-edge innovations, people are empowered to fulfill their tasks wherever however they like. A good case in this point is that Telecommuting radically changes the traditional way employees work and allows them to work in with a more flexible schedule. Not only the enormous time cost technological revolution has saved in work The technological revolution has not only saved an enormous amount of time and cost in work, but it has also cut down a considerable amount of overhead cost. It is quite common that these days nowadays for administrative officers are not to not be restricted to workplaces any more, due to the great convenience of video conferencing. It is predictable that in the near future, there will be more technological breakthroughs, which can improve job satisfaction.Despite a multitude of undeniable merits (Excellent link!), the negative impacts the technology has on work are still noteworthy. As the Internet spreads worldwide, cybercrimes, a new type of crime in the 21th Century, are becoming rampant (more widespread). Suffering from privacy leakage, millions of netizens have fallen prey to online hacking. Not only this, the tendency for the public to become more dependent on technology also triggers concerns. Since everyone can google what they want to know online, fewer and fewer people are willing to think and solve problems on their own. It seems that technology deprives human beings of creativity and initiative, making them less creative than ever before.
Well done Gloria, you have written a well balanced argument with some excellent points! As a suggestion, perhaps you could begin with an opening sentence or two introducing the topic and giving some context (e.g. With the rapid advancement of technology in the workplace, it is important to consider both the benefits and drawbacks to harnessing these new technological tools.). Some other points to consider, or think about:
- Some examples of possible technological breakthroughs in the future. How might they improve job satisfaction?
- Some examples of hacking and/or personal impact (e.g. identity theft)
Keep up the good work Gloria!
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