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Ielts essay practising "Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?" The tourist industry keeps increasing. More and more people enjoy their holidays in other places or countries than where they live. This development contributes to better employment chances for individuals as for the local economy of the society. Firstly, all the tourists coming to a certain place will give the local individuals work. All those visitors will want to go eating in restaurants, or they want to go for a sightseeing tour. They also might go snorkelling or visit a local museum. All these possible places tourists go to, provide jobs for the local community. Those individuals will find more jobs when tourists keep coming to their cities. Secondly, the increase of tourists also benefits the whole society. When the industry grows, the economy will be boosted enormously. The first reason to believe that is that the local community will gain more jobs to satisfy the needs of the tourists. When people have jobs, they have more money to spend, which contributes to a better economy. The second reason is that those tourists themselves are spending money as well. If they want to do a sightseeing tour or they go to a restaurant, they will give money in return of those favours. In conclusion it can be said that the growing tourist industry contributes to better employment for the individuals of the local community. They will be able to get a job in satisfying the travelers. It also benefits the society because the economy increases as a result of tourists spending money for leisure activities.

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Ielts essay practising

"Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?"

The tourist industry keeps increasing continues to grow every day. More and more people are enjoying their holidays in other places or countries other than where they live. This development contributes to better employment chances for individuals and benefits as for the local economy of the society.

Firstly, all the tourists coming to a certain place will bring give the local individuals work. All those these visitors will want to go eating in restaurants, or they will want to go for a sightseeing tour. They also might go snorkelling or visit a local museum. All of these possible potential tourism places tourists go to, provide jobs for the local community. Those individuals will find more jobs when tourists keep coming to their cities.

Secondly, the increase increasing number of tourists also benefits the whole society as a whole. When the industry grows, the economy will be boosted enormously. The first reason to believe that for this is that the local community will gain more jobs to satisfy the needs of the tourists. When people have jobs, they have more money to spend, which contributes to a better economy. The second reason is that those tourists themselves are spending money as well. If they want to do a sightseeing tour or they go to a restaurant, they will give money in return of for those favours.

In conclusion, it can be said that the growing tourist industry contributes to better employment for the individuals of the local community. They  These individuals will be able to get a job in satisfying contributing towards the satisfaction of the travelers. It also benefits the society because the economy increases improves as a result of tourists spending money for leisure activities.

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