Goodbye 2016 hello 2017
Tonight is the last night in 2016. 2016 gonna be past. 2017 is a future i hop it's going be good years full of live full of success full of happy. I wish my plans and dreams gonna be true.
Happy new year to all.
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Goodbye 2016 hello 2017
Tonight is the last night of 2016. 2016 is gonna be in the past. 2017 is the future. I hope it's going to be a good year full of live full of life, success and happiness. I hope my plans and dreams are gonna come true.Happy new year to all.
Things in green are wrong because of context.
Things in blue are wrong because of run-on sentences.
Things in pink are wrong because of a missing auxiliary verb (is, are).
Things in red are wrong because of spelling.
I changed "wish" to "hope" (orange) because wish is typically means something you want to be different in the past, or things you want that you know you can't have. "I wish I was taller."
Use hope for things in the future.
Hope this helps. Happy New Year : )
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Goodbye 2016 hello 2017
Tonight is the last night in 2016. 2016 is going to be past. 2017 is the future I hope it to be a good year full of love , success and happiness. I wish my plans and dreams come true.Happy new year Everyone.
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