SOCIAL MEDIA NETWORKS
You have been discussing the role of social media networks in society today, at school. You have been asked to write an email to your teacher giving your opinion on whether social media networks cause more harm than good.
Dear Mr. Smith:
I´m writing in reference to the discussion we had in classroom last day about the role of social media networks nowadays. In this email, I´m going to considere the advantages and the disadvantages regarding that interesting topic.
On one hand, a lot of surveys have found that social media has changed our way of seeing the world. It´s used in order to communicate with everybody in everywhere around the world. So, It´s reasonable to say that it has got a great deal of benefits for people. Firstly, you can communicate easily and quickly with people and that it does more comfortable relationships, so, you can talk with people while you´re lying on bed. In addition, you can keep in contact with people that you can´t see everyday, so it´s an excellent way to get on well with people. It´s a great idea!
On the other hand, social media networks could be used to make jokes, overall teenagers and that it could be a bad point. From my point of view, it could be a good use of them if you use it in order to laugh of someone because that person could have a low self-confident. That it could be a terrible situation for someone!
In conclusion, I really think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and it depends on the use you do of that, it could be a fantastic tool to communicate between people. It´s worth to do a good use of that!
See you soon.
José Antonio.
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SOCIAL MEDIA NETWORKS
You have been discussing the role of social media networks in society today, at school. You have been asked to write an email to your teacher giving your opinion on whether social media networks cause more harm than good.Dear Mr. Smith:
I´m writing in reference to the discussion we had in class yesterday about the role of social media networks nowadays. In this email, I'm going to consider the advantages and the disadvantages regarding this interesting topic.
On one hand, a lot of surveys have found that social media has changed our way of seeing the world. It´s used in order to communicate with everybody in everywhere around the world. So, It´s reasonable to say that it has many benefits for people. Firstly, you can communicate easily and quickly with people, which can lead to more comfortable relationships, especially when you can talk with people while you´re lying in bed. In addition, you can keep in contact with people that you can´t see every day, so it´s an excellent way to get on well with people. It´s a great idea!
On the other hand, social media networks could be used to make cruel jokes, especially among teenagers and that it could be a bad point. From my point of view, it could be a good use of them if you use social media in order to laugh at someone it could cause that person to have a low self-confidence. That could be a terrible situation for someone!
In conclusion, I really think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages but it depends on how you use it. It could be a fantastic tool to communicate with people. It´s worthwhile if used in the right way !
See you soon,
José Antonio.
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