Believe in luck
Let’s talk about the luck. I always believe that people talk rubbish when speaking about being lucky or unlucky. I used to think that one always get what he want only by himself. I believed that luck is only for lazy people, who is sitting on the sofa and waiting for some help from the heaven. It turned out I was mistaken.
I have found out that I am damn lucky person. I have figured it out today. Maybe God remembers about me and tries to give me what I ask him about. Sometimes I am not careful with my wishes though, so I get too much than i can bear) But it's OK with me, because I love this life and I m happy to have all the experience. God help everyone to get what they want to!
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Believe in luck
Let’s talk about the luck. I always believed that people talked rubbish when speaking they spoke about being lucky or unlucky. I used to think that one always gets what he wants only by himself. I believed that luck is was only for lazy people, who is sitting on the sofa and waiting for some help from the heaven. It turned out I was mistaken.I have found out that I am a damn lucky person. I have figured it out today. Maybe God remembers about me and tries wants to give me what I ask him about for. Sometimes I am not careful with my wishes though, so I get too much more than i I need. can bear) But it's OK okay with me, because I love this life and I m happy to have all the experience. May God help everyone to get what they want to!
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Belief in luck*
Let’s talk about luck. I always believed that people talked rubbish when speaking about being lucky or unlucky. I used to think that one always gets what one wants only by one's self. I believed that luck is only for lazy people, who sit on the sofa and wait for some help from heaven. It turned out I was mistaken.I have found out that I am damn lucky person. I figured it out today. Maybe God remembers me and tries to give me what I ask from him. Sometimes I am not careful with my wishes though, so I get more than I can bear. But it's OK with me, because I love this life and I m happy to have all the experience. God helps everyone to get what they want, too!
*'Believe in Luck' is an order. It means that you want people to believe in Luck. 'Belief in Luck' means that you discuss this belief. I was not sure which was your meaning.
Very well written!
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Believe in luck
Let’s talk about the luck. I always believe that people talks rubbish when they are speaking about being lucky or unlucky. I used to think about that one always get what he want only by himself. I believed that luck is only for lazy people, who is sitting on the sofa and waiting for some help from the heaven. It turned out that I was mistaken wrong.I have found out that I am damn lucky person. I have figured it out today. Maybe God remembers about me and tries to give me what I ask from him about. Sometimes I am not careful with my wishes though, so I get too much more than I can bear) But it's OK with (for) me, because I love this life and I'm happy to have all the these experiences. God helps everyone to get what they want to!
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I just believe in my self
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You have good thinks
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