Long time no see
Hi:)I was't seeing this page so long time.In fact,I went to Cebu for two month.To study.Cebu was very nice place and nice experience for me.I wanna go to Cebu again.And then,I gonna Toronto next month.So,if ur staying there,can u tell me about Toronto?I'm waiting for ur message.
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Long time no see
Hi:) I was't haven't seeing visited* this page so such a long time. In fact, I went to Cebu for two month.T to study. Cebu was a very nice place and it was a nice experience for me. I wanna want to** go to Cebu again. And then,I gonna I'm going to Toronto next month. So, if ur you're staying there, can u you tell me about Toronto? I'm waiting for ur your message.あやかさん、Welcome back. I inserted a space after "Hi:)" to separate it from the rest of the message. Also, be sure to add a space after every comma or period. (In the places where you need to put a space, I've inserted a space and marked it in yellow).
In text messages (携帯に) and very informal writing, it's okay to use "u" and "ur" but generally you shouldn't use them in writing.
Specific notes:
* I changed "seeing" to "visited." We often use "visit" to describe viewing a website.
** It's okay to use contractions (shortened words) like "can't" "won't" "couldn't" "I'm" "you're" etc. But in writing we don't write words like "wanna" or "gonna." (We can use these in informal speech, but not in writing. It makes the writing sound like baby-talk).
Good luck in Toronto. It's a fun and very nice city.
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