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My one day Today, every thing is not good for me. I feel tired and bored. I played games, chatted with my friends, watched films and read newspapers but all of them aren't able to make me happier. I need to go out and ride a bike alone around lakes. Maybe, it is a little fun and makes me comfortable. What should I do now? I am in office. I wish this time were faster

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My one day

Today, every thing is not nothing was good for me. I feel tired and bored. I played games, chatted with my friends, watched films, and read newspapers.  But all  none of them aren't were able to make me happier lift my mood. I need to go out and ride a bike alone around the lakes alone. Maybe, it is a will be a little fun and makes me feel comfortable. What should I do now? I am in the office. I wish this time were moved faster


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My one day

Today, everything is not nothing was good for me. I feel tired and bored. I played games, chatted with my friends, watched films and read newspapers but all of them aren't able to make me happier nothing was making me happy. I need to go out and ride a bike alone around the lake lakes. (Maybe, it is a little fun and makes me comfortable.) - We don't need to use 'maybe' here because you would be sure if its fun or not./ In English Comfortable means when the things are as large as is needed or wanted. So for this sentence you can say  ' It's fun and I'm enjoying a lot. -  What should I do now? I am in the office. I wish this time would pass were fast.


- If you need any explanation I can explain to you. 

Cheers.

KG

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