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My father is my idol Hi everyone, today I’m really so busy, I’m exhausted because I have many works at my company.This is not a conversation, but today I want to tell you about my father who I love so much. His name means the peace, he’s fifty-eight years old. He’s a teacher. He’s generous but he is so fastidious about my study. He has a simple life, he always go to school by bike. He works at school from 7AM to 11AM and sometimes he has to work in the afternoon. He is very humorous, sociable and always willing to help people. In my opinion, he is very comfortable to be with and strict. He always reminds me to learn. My father behaves in caring way towards people so my neighbors love and esteem him.I remember: when I was a child, whenever I had a fault, my father was the first encourage to me. In his free time, he enjoying watching football, the football team that he likes is Manchester United. But I don’t like MU because Barca is the greatest team for me. When MU compete with Barca, my mother and I cheer for Barca but my young sister and father aren’t. With me, my father is my idol, he has many good character for me. He is very understanding and patient Time gone so fast, I am growing up and my father is getting older but the affections I give to him will never change.

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My father is my idol

Hi everyone, today I’m really so busy, I’m exhausted because I have many works at my company.This is not a conversation, but today I want to tell you about my father who I love so much. His name means the peace, he’s fifty-eight years old. He’s a teacher. He’s generous but he is so fastidious about my study. He has a simple life, he always goes to school by bike. He works at school from 7AM to 11AM and sometimes he has to work in the afternoon. He is very humorous, sociable and always willing to help people. In my opinion, he is very comfortable to be with and strict. He always reminds me to learn. My father behaves in caring way towards people so my neighbors love and esteem him.I remember: when I was a child, whenever I had a fault, my father was the first encourage to me.
In his free time, he enjoys watching football, the football team that he likes is Manchester United. But I don’t like MU because Barca is the greatest team for me. When MU completes with Barca, my mother and I cheer for Barca but my young sister and father aren’t.
With me, my father is my idol, he has many good characters for me. He is very understanding and patient
Time went so fast, I am growing up and my father is getting older but the affections I give to him will never change.
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My father is my idol

Hi everyone, today I’m really so busy, I’m exhausted because I have many works a lot of work vì work không đếm được at my company.This is not a conversation, but today I want to tell you about my father who I love so much. His name means the peace, he’s fifty-eight years old. He’s a teacher. He’s generous but he is so fastidious about my study. He has a simple life, he always goes to school by bike. He works at school from 7AM to 11AM and sometimes he has to work in the afternoon. He is very humorous, sociable and always willing to help people. In my opinion, he is very comfortable to be with and he is also strict. He always reminds me to learn. My father behaves in caring way towards people so my neighbors love and esteem him.I remember: when I was a child, whenever I had a fault, my father was the first encourage to me. vậy dùng fault trong trường hợp này là không hợp lí. Fault là lỗi sai mà. C nên dùng had trouble
In his free time, he enjoys watching football, the football team which he likes is Manchester United. But I don’t like MU because Barca is the greatest team for me. When MU competes with Barca, my mother and I cheer for Barca but my young sister and father do not.
For me, my father is my idol, he has many good characteristics for me. He is very understanding and patient
Time has gone so fast, I am growing up and my father is getting older but the affections I give to him will never change.
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