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Terrible storm I live in town near to beach in Valencia. The past weekend, there was a terrible storm. It was raining very hard all time. Some places flooded and people couldn't go out their houses. My sister and her boyfriend live at ground floor very near to beach, and they had to leave our home and move my parents home. But this wasn't so awful, because my sister's house doesn't have imperfections. Finally, when the storm passed they could come back their home. For me, it was right, because I could pass more time with them. And my sister have two dogs and I could play with them.

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A terrible storm.

I live in town near to the beach in Valencia. The past Last weekend, there was a terrible storm. It was raining very hard all time. Some places were flooded and people couldn't go out of their houses.

My sister and her boyfriend live in a ground floor (apartment) very near to the beach, and they had to leave our their home and move to my parents home.

But this wasn't so awful, because my sister's house doesn't have imperfections  was not damaged. Finally, when the storm passed they could come go back to their home.

For me, it was alright, because I could pass spend more time with them. And My sister has two dogs and I could play with them.

Well done.

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Terrible storm

I live in town near the beach in Valencia. Last weekend there was a terrible storm. It was raining very hard all the time. Some places flooded and people couldn't go out of their houses.

My sister and her boyfriend live on the ground floor very near to the beach, and they had to leave their home and move to my parents home.

But this wasn't so awful, because my sister's house didn't have any damage. Finally, when the storm passed, they could go back to their home.

For me it was alright, because I could spend more time with them. And my sister has two dogs that I could play with.

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