annoying pimple
I seldom grew pimples in the past time.But recently,there always some pimples in my face.How annoying! And I went to see the doctor,she said they are caused by folliculitis.She let me sleep early,eat more fruits and do some exercise. It's very difficult for me to sleep early.Stay up is a bad habit,but is very difficult to change. If I want to stop growing pimples,I must sleep early.So I need to gradually adjust.Fighting!!!
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annoying pimple
I seldom grew pimples in the past time. But recently, there are always some pimples in on my face. How annoying! And I went to see the doctor ,she said they are caused by folliculitis. She suggested I let me sleep early, eat more fruits and do some exercise. It's very difficult for me to sleep early. Staying up is a bad habit, but is very difficult to change. If I want to stop growing pimples, I must sleep early. So I need to gradually adjust. Fighting!!!Good entry Aether! Just a few suggestions -
- Make sure you're spacing in between your sentences (But recently,there are / But recently, there are)
- Be careful with using Prepositions (...pimples in my face / pimples on my face...)
I hope my corrections help :)
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