Measures to improva the traffic situation There are a lot of traffic jams in our world. My city isn't an exeption. We have traffic jams too, but how can we improve this problem. I think everyone has t

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Measures to improva the traffic situation There are a lot of traffic jams in our world. My city isn't an exeption. We have traffic jams too, but how can we improve this problem. I think everyone has their own car or bike or uses public transport. So it's no wonder that we have traffic jams. One of the way to improve traffic situation can be reducing quantity cars. But it's difficult to do and also it's possible to do taxes for cars more expensive The other way to improve this situation with traffic jams can be enhancement road's sistem. If we don't want to have any traffic jams, so, traffic lights should work more comfortable, and roads should be good for driving. In the end I want to sat that situation with traffic jams is very timily and its improvement is difficult. I'd say that it's impossible to have no traffic jams becouse we live in the modern world and have technical progress

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Measures to improve the traffic situation

There are a lot of traffic jams in our world. My city isn't an exception. We have traffic jams too, but how can we improve this problem?
I think everyone has their own car or bike or uses public transport, so it's no wonder that we have traffic jams. One of the ways to improve this can be reducing the quantity of cars but it's difficult to achieve and also tax more expensive cars.
The other way can be to enhance the road systems. If we don't want to have any traffic jams, traffic lights should work more efficiently, so the roads should be better for driving.
In the end I want to say that the situation with traffic jams is very time costly and its improvement is difficult. I'd like to say that it's impossible to have no traffic jams because we live in a modern world and have technical progress.

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Well done! Is the last point on technical progress a slight contradiction, shouldn't technology help improve traffic problems?

Good job!

Measures to improve the traffic situation

There are a lot of traffic jams in our world. My city isn't an exception. We have traffic jams, too, but how can we solve this problem?
I think everyone has their own car or bike or uses public transport. So it's no wonder that we have traffic jams. One of the ways* to improve the traffic situation can be to reduce the number of cars. But it's difficult to do. However, it is also possible to tax cars making them more expensive.
Another way to lessen the traffic jams could be to improve the roads. If we don't want to have any traffic jams, traffic lights should work better, and roads should be good for driving.
In the end, I want to say that the situation with traffic jams is a very topical one, and its solution is difficult. I'd say that it's impossible to have no traffic jams because we live in the modern world and have technical progress.

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Very well written!

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