Introducing my challenges
This is part of my speech. Could you correct it pleae? thank you.
I’m from Japan, which has many differences from USA in terms of cultural and social and linguistic aspects.
I’m experiencing many challenges here from driving, finding good Japanese food, and communication using a new language. Overall I enjoy this opportunity. I love this nice weather, beautiful sky, wide streets and less populated city. I appreciate supportive people here.
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Introducing my challenges
This is part of my speech. Could you correct it please? Thank you.I’m from Japan, which has many differences from the U.S. in terms of cultural, social and linguistic aspects.
I’m experiencing many challenges here including driving, finding good Japanese food, and communication using a new language. Overall I enjoy this opportunity. I love the nice weather, beautiful skies, wide streets and the less-populated city. I appreciate the supportive people here.
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Introducing my challenges
This is part of my speech. Could you correct it please? thank you.I’m from Japan, which has many differences from USA in terms of cultural, and social and linguistic aspects.
I’m experiencing many a lot of* challenges here from including driving, finding good Japanese food, and communication using a new language**. Overall I enjoy this opportunity. I love this the nice weather, beautiful sky, wide streets and less populated city. I appreciate supportive people here.
すごい!けい子さんの完全なスピーチを見たい!
* In the previous sentence, you used "many," so I suggest that you use a different word or phrase here. I inserted "a lot of." A more formal alternative is "I'm experiencing quite a few challenges . . ." Some more casual alternatives are "lots of" or "tons of . . ."
** These are good examples. After "driving" you can add, if you want, "on the right side of the road." I would move "finding good Japanese food" as your last example, since it is the most personal - and the most funny!
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