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The charts compares the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas : North America, South America,Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia.
In regard to the industrial use, Europe is the highest percentage, which is more ten times, considerably lower than Central Asia. Moreover it shows that in relation to industrial use, developed areas are high percentage than developing areas : South America,Africa,Central Asia, and South East Asia.
South America is the highest percentage with 19% using water, followed by Europe, North America, and Central Asia and South East Asia are the same percentage. When it comes to agricaltural use, developing areas show higher percentage than North America and Europe.
Generally, it would appear that industrial use and domestic use is occupied by developing area's countries in it. (158words)
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These charts shows the comparsions of
the percentage of water used for different purposes
in six areas : North America, South America,Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South
East Asia.
In regard to the industrial use, Europe (amounts
to / has) the highest percentage, which is more than ten times, considerably
lower than Central Asia. Moreover it shows that the developed areas make up a
higher percentage than the developing areas : South America,Africa,Central
Asia, and South East Asia.
South America gets the
highest percentage with 19% using water, followed by Europe, North America, Central
Asia and South East Asia reach the same percentage. When it comes to
agricaltural use, developing areas show higher percentage than North America
and Europe.
Generally, it appears
that industrial use and domestic use have been common in developing area's
countries
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