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Thanks e-mail
Hi katie,I’m sorry for not writing earlier . I´ve very busy since I got back because I’ve been looking for a new job.
Thanks for this the last month, I loved being in London. This time was great for me to improve my English. I thought You have a wonderful family, your children were very kind and they helped me to with my English classes. Yesterday, I remembered thought of our trip to the Harry Potter’s amusement park; How we did enjoyed that day!
I´ve starting working as a maths teacher in a primary school and I´ve been very busy because these days. I´ve corrected a lot of exams and in addition, I have had meetings with the parents. Last week my car broke down so I’ll buy a new one with the money that I’ll earn this year.
I have many photos of my month in London and I promised your children that I’d send you some of them, so I’ve attached my favourite photo with yours.
That’s all for now.Thanks again for everything. And I hope you’ll come to Spain in the Sspring so you can meet my friends, they´d love to meet you.
Best wishes,
Ale
I thought you have a wonderful family ....................... sounds a little bit like you are not sure if she has a wonderful family.!!
better to say : You have a wonderful family
Thank you e-mail
Hi Katie,
I’m sorry for not writing earlier but I´ve been very busy since I got back because I’ve been looking for a new job.
Thanks for this month, I loved being in London. This time was great to improve my English. I thought you have a wonderful family, your children were very kind and they helped me in my English classes. Yesterday, I remembered our trip to the Harry Potter’s amusement park; How we did enjoyed that day!
I´ve starting working as a math teacher in a primary school and I´ve been very busy because these days I´ve corrected a lot of exams and in addition, I have had meetings with parents. Last week my car broke down so I’ll buy a new one with the money thta I’ll earn this year.
I have many photos of my month in London and I promised your children that I’d send you some of them, so I’ve attached my favourite photo with yours.
That’s all for now.Thanks again for everything. And I hope you’ll come to Spain in spring so you meet my friends, they´d love to meet you.
Best wishes,
Ale
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