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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you. Dear Diary, Today it was a good day. First I went with my family in a park, with lots of snow . My family and me made Snowmans. After that we went to the cinema and watched a interesting film about a boy who learned to fly. When the film was in the end, we went by car to a very nice restaurant. The restaurant was with lots of beautiful decoration. Befor meal came I and my brother played outside in the snow, it was very funny. Then it was seven pm and we went at home. I opened my advent calendar and it was chocolate there. I ate it and made math in advent. It's a play , but in the personal computer. I don’t like it very much, but I must do it. When I was finished with it, I cleaned my teeth and went to bed. Good night!

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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you.

Dear Diary,
Today it was a good day. First I went with my family in a park, with lots of snow. My family and I made Snowmans. After that we went to the cinema and watched an interesting film about a boy who learned to fly. After the film ended, we went a very nice restaurant by car. The restaurant was beautifully decorated. Before the meal came I and my brother played outside in the snow, it was very funny. Then it was 7pm and we went to the home. I opened my advent calendar and there were chocolates there. I ate it and made math in advent. It's a play, but in the personal computer. I don’t like it very much, but I must do it. When I was finished with it, I cleaned my teeth and went to bed.
Good night!

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