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The things l learn from____30 Lessons I Learned in 30 Years By this article starting, he said advice is always easier giving than receiving. Certainly it is same as action speak louder than words, l think it can apply in different aspect. Return to the theme content, there are several advice that is benefit for us. 15. Your childhood matters, but don’t let it control your adulthood 4. Drop your ego 3. Strive to be a better version of yourself every day 8. Frame your goals 20. Follow your dreams no matter what I make these advises divide into three sorts, the first sort is about to be yourself, don’t care about past and calmness your heart, based on the present though you can be something you want. The second sort means to learn things new in everyday, accumulating the new things, you can see the vast world around you. For me, the third sort is the most useful one, to achieve you dream the most difficult thing is to insist it until you dream come true, persistent is really hard, but if you can frame you goal set in many step and have specific target, in that way conquer the difficult and keep you dream like a ship rush into destination, you will taste pleasant and joy when you arrived. His life experience is full of intelligence. But just like l said, as long as you act it, you will acquire you want.

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The things l learned from '30 Lessons I Learned in 30 Years'

At the start of this article, he said advice is always easier given than received. Certainly, it is the same as actions speak louder than words - l think it can apply in different aspects. Returning to the theme content, there are several advice that are beneficial for us.


15. Your childhood matters, but don’t let it control your adulthood
4. Drop your ego
3. Strive to be a better version of yourself every day
8. Frame your goals
20. Follow your dreams no matter what


I divided these pieces of advice into three sorts: the first sort is about being yourself, don’t care about the past and calmness your heart. Based on the present,  you can be anything you want. The second sort means to learn new things in everyday. By accumulating the new things, you can see the vast world around you. For me, the third sort is the most useful one, to achieve your dream. The most difficult thing is to persist it until your dream comes true. Persistence is really hard, but if you can frame your goal set in many steps and have a specific target, in that way you can conquer the difficulty and keep your dream like a ship rushing to its destination. You will taste feel pleasure and joy once you have arrived.


His life experience is full of intelligence. But just like l said, as long as you act on it, you will acquire what you want.




Good work Casper! This is an excellent piece of writing. Have a look at the edits which I made which include some more natural expressions and appropriate vocabulary. Try to work on dividing your writing into sentences next time you write. It's better if the sentences aren't too long.

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