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Relative clauses Yesterday is my birthday , I met Any who is my best friend. She give me for a present which made me amazed.After the end of the party , i immediately her gift. When it opened , I saw an incredibly cute bear .I ask her the reason why donate for me this gift . She said the bear as a friend and she's always in my sidebar section at sad or happy and I can confide to it . I hugged her in and thank her very much for the gift of this meaning

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Yesterday was my birthday.  I met Any who is my best friend. She give me for a present which made me amazed. After the end of the party , I immediately opened her gift. When it was opened , I saw an incredibly cute bear. I ask her the reason why she gave this gift . She said the bear is her best friend and it will be always in my sidebar section at sad or happy and I can confide to it whenever I am happy or sad . I hugged her in and said thank her very much for the gift of this meaning.
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Yesterday is was my birthday , I met up with Any who is my best friend. She give me for a present which made me that amazed me. After the end of the party , i immediately opened her gift. When it I opened  it, I saw an incredibly cute bear .I asked her the reason why donate for she had given  gave me this gift . She said the bear as is a friend and she's that will always in be by my sidebar section at sad or happy and whenever I needed I can could confide to it . I hugged her in and thanked her very much for the gift of this and it's meaning.


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