Winter days before Christmas
I definitely love winter days like these: the air is cold but it's sunny and it's really enjoyable to walk around in the city centre. Christmas is just round the corner and everybody seems to be busy trying to find the right present for his/her loved ones: I like this atmosphere. By the way I should hurry up and get Christmas gifts too!
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Winter days before Christmas
I definitely love winter days like these: the air is cold but it's sunny and it's really enjoyable to walk around in the city centre. Christmas is just round the corner and everybody seems to be busy trying to find the right present for his/her* loved ones: I like this atmosphere. By the way I should hurry up and get Christmas gifts too!*Instead of "his/her", try using "they"! E.g. "[...] trying to find the right present for their loved ones; [...]" It is a gender neutral pronoun that is commonly used when people do not know the gender of someone. It has been common in the past decades.
Other than that, this seems to be all correct to me! Try using a semicolon ; instead of a colon : when you are not quoting someone or listing things.
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