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As the development of the society ,the diversity between countries are becoming more and more small. That is to say , countries becoming more and more similar to cater for this globalized trend .In my opinion ,though it has some advantages in some aspects , the disadvantages in this situation outweigh its advantages .
Indeed ,I have to say that this "similar" trend has some advantages on the surface,such as the economy field.It can provide convenience for people. For they can buy the same products just in their own countries or cities instead of travelling to other area. Thus , people could not only save their money but also avoid time waste . In addition , goverments may get benefits from this way too .In a globalization background , the internatinal communication between countries become more easy and realizable.
However , inspite of some limited benefits I mentioned above ,the disadvantages would be obvious .For instance , in terms of protecting the culture diversity, the "similar "trend will go against this idea. This means that countries might lose characters and people have no sense of judgment even more it is an obstacle to people's creativities and innovations. For example, in such a context , the world's leading Fashion industry would like to indicate people from all around the world what would be the most popular wearing in current , what kind of clothing should people wear would be considered as as stylish look. Thus , you can often see people wearing the same pattern coat in the street. So here's the problem: How could we talk about "beauty" or "taste " without diference or character . ?
Overall , I think that different should be kept between counries in a certain extent rather than becoming more and more similar.
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