story of an emigrant
My country, Spain, is having one of the worst moments of its history. The reasons are many; economic crisis, bad goverment management, corruption, and bad policies.
A lot of young and not so young spaniards are emigreting to looking for a oportunity to survive with dignity.
Working condicions in Spain are becaming worse each day and the minimun wage is the lowest in Europe, but the reallity is even worst because many of the working people don't even receive this minimum wage for their work and the unemployment is increasing each day, actually 50 % of the young people and 26% of the population are unemployed. With this expectations thinking about to come back to my country at the moment is imposible for me and for many people living foreign like me.
I don't know if I will be able to come back one day . Meanwhile I am trying to survive, learning english, knowing a new culture and growing each day a little more.
It's a hard sometimes to live foreing, specially the first years because you miss a lot your family and yours lifelong friends. For me, now is getting easier because I have got a new life here, in Ireland, where I am living. I have a new friends and I lived new experiences here, so I started to feel Ireland like my home as well.
Here the music is amazing , and maybe that is another reason because I feel very comfy in this country. You can find music all the time, everywhere and with a lot of quality and creativity. The pleople is nice as well. The irish people is very friendly and although it is difficult to know them intimately they are always able to help.
We'll see what have the future for me...
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story of an emigrant
My country, Spain, is having one of the worst moments of its history. The reasons are many; economic crisis, bad government management, corruption, and bad policies.A lot of young and not so young Spaniards are emigrating, looking for an opportunity to survive with dignity.
Working conditions in Spain are becoming worse each day and the minimum wage is the lowest in Europe, but the reality is even worse because many of the working people don't even receive this minimum wage for their work and the unemployment is increasing each day, actually 50 % of the young people and 26% of the general population are unemployed. With these expectations thinking about coming back to my country at the moment is impossible for me and for many people living abroad like myself.
I don't know if I will be able to come back one day . Meanwhile, I am trying to survive, learning English, knowing a new culture and growing each day a little more.
It's a hard sometimes to live abroad, especially the first years because you miss your family a lot as well as your lifelong friends. For me, it is now getting easier because I have got a new life here, in Ireland, where I am living. I have a new friends and I have lived new experiences here, so I have begun to feel Ireland like is my home as well.
Here the music is amazing , and maybe that is another reason because I feel very comfy in this country. You can find music all the time, everywhere and with a lot of quality and creativity. The people are nice as well. The Irish people are very friendly and although it is difficult to know them intimately, they are always able to help.
We'll see what have the future for me...
Muy bien hecho Cristina, only a few errors, which are minor and common errors for Spanish speakers. Remember to capitalize languages and countries (proper nouns) and that "people" is plural in English.
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story of an emigrant
My country, Spain, is having one of the worst moments of its history. The reasons are many; economic crisis, bad government management, corruption, and bad policies.A lot of young and not so young spaniards are emigrating to look for an oportunity to survive with dignity.
Working condicions in Spain are becoming worse each day and the minimun wage is the lowest in Europe, but the reality is even worse because many of the working people don't even receive this minimum wage for their work and the unemployment is increasing each day, actually 50 % of the young people and 26% of the population are unemployed. With these expectations , thinking about coming back to my country at the moment is impossible for me and for many people living in foreign countries like me.
I don't know if I will be able to come back one day . Meanwhile I am trying to survive, learning english, knowing a new culture and growing each day a little more.
It's a hard sometimes to live abroad, specially the first years because you miss a lot your family and your lifelong friends. For me, now is getting easier because I have got a new life here, in Ireland, where I am living. I have a new friends and I lived new experiences here, so I started to feel Ireland like my home as well.
Here the music is amazing , and maybe that is another reason because I feel very comfy in this country. You can find music all the time, everywhere and with a lot of quality and creativity. The people are nice as well. The irish people are very friendly and although it is difficult to know them intimately they are always able to help.
We'll see what have the future for me...
Your English is so good. Just a few mistakes but don't worry. Keep practicing and you will be fine :)
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